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Sunday, September 16, 2007

A poem for Kids 2


For the Kids who missed the first poem:

A Poem for Kids 1

Freaky freaks are on the peak.
Lunacy is what you seek.
Just punch your eyes
And let them leak.

Flicks and tricks,
Sticks and bricks,
Shots and stabs
Are just for kicks.

Cut the crap,
Just take a nap.
I'll leave you alone,
Can't you see the trap?

A growing bud,
Drops of blood,
Stains on sleeves,
All buried in mud.

Late at night
Stars are bright.
I'm next to a corpse
Paralyzed with fright.

Tears and sighs
Sometimes are lies.
But deep inside
You'll hear the cries.

Through your mind
You'll dig to find
Truth and deceit
And fear that's blind.

Reread the lines,
They're not just rhymes.
You're hypnotized
By shining signs!

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24 Comments:

Blogger Maat said...

hehehe
i dont know why bas it reminded me of Jumanji!!!!!
I like that.. the whole idea of kids' poem :D

Reread the lines,
They're not just rhymes.
You're hypnotized
By shining signs!

greaaat work!!

I think the 1st one was stronger though! both are still freaky :)

September 16, 2007 7:03 PM  
Blogger BaTaBeeT said...

shoot me !

September 17, 2007 12:08 AM  
Blogger insomniac said...

creepy!!! love ittho:))

September 17, 2007 3:12 AM  
Blogger ŞoŖśậŖấầ said...

أسأل الله لكم فى شهر رمضان حسنات تتكاثر وذنوب تتناثر وهموم تتطاير وأن يجعل بسمتكم سعادة وصمتكم عبادة وخاتمتكم شهادة ورزقكم فى زيادة...
أدعو الله أن يتقبل منا و منكم الصيام و القيام وصالح الأعمال

September 17, 2007 2:04 PM  
Blogger Ma-3lina said...

Late at night
Stars are bright.
I'm next to a corpse
Paralyzed with fright.


loooool for kids yup like us y3ni

rhyme is amazing and I agree with Maat about Jumanji thing

nice work and happy ramdan :))

September 17, 2007 2:33 PM  
Anonymous Deemco said...

Wow, I loved it! :)

September 17, 2007 11:41 PM  
Blogger ZeRoCoOl said...

Reminiscent of ring around the rosy. A children’s rhyme that was originally penned to make kids aware of the plague.
Ring around the Rosy:

One of the first visible signs of infection were red rings surrounding a rosy bump.

Pocket full of Posy:

Keep the air surrounding you sanitary.


Ashes, Ashes, We all Fall Down:

no need to elaborate.





I guess the vague relevance lies in the poetic darkness of both pieces.

September 19, 2007 12:01 PM  
Blogger hurricane_x said...

maat..
yeah, I guess it somehow relates to the atmosphere of the movie!!
And it suits the freaky KG kids :)

epitaph..
thx..
wenty tayebah:)

batabeet..
BANG!
...BANG!!

insomniac..
glad u liked it:)

sorsara..
GOD bless u..
Amen.

ma-3lina..
thx,..
yep, for kids like u :)

deemco..
cool, and thanks for the visit!

zerocool..
mmm..
"the vague relevance lies in the poetic darkness of both pieces"
yeah, but "Black Death" is much more darker,..
or at least I hope so!!

September 20, 2007 4:07 PM  
Blogger Jade said...

For some reason...
It just didnt sink in.

September 21, 2007 12:43 AM  
Blogger hurricane_x said...

mmm...
Maybe because it's for kids!

September 21, 2007 10:18 PM  
Blogger HafSSa said...

speechless and terified, thanks :(

September 22, 2007 2:50 PM  
Blogger hurricane_x said...

hafsa..
u r welcome :)

September 25, 2007 10:19 PM  
Blogger Yellow Leaves said...

lol at its for kids, that just makes it so my cup of tea!

I enjoyed it, and are you a happytreefriends fan?

September 29, 2007 1:50 AM  
Blogger hurricane_x said...

sure, they r marvelous :)

September 30, 2007 9:28 PM  
Blogger frozen love said...

looool

Cut the crap,
Just take a nap.
I'll leave you alone,
Can't you see the trap?


ya satr..agheb kl da we arg3 ala2ek kda brdo...lool

nice one..im back 3la fkra

October 5, 2007 4:59 AM  
Blogger hurricane_x said...

hey,...welcome back!!
Long time no see :)

October 9, 2007 9:34 PM  
Blogger Eman Eltaher said...

some words I don't understand
It seems that I'm really strong in language :(

I thik that i need to have a dictionary

Anyway, You made a work which I should give you regards on .. cause you take care of kids .. the symbol of pureness

So Go Ahead Agaaaaaaaaaaaaaain
God bless you
Happy feast

October 13, 2007 9:47 PM  
Blogger Ma-3lina said...

Happy Feast :))

October 14, 2007 1:27 PM  
Blogger hurricane_x said...

eman eltaher...
I'm just poisoning their thoughts!
Happy feast :)

ma-3lina..
Happy feast :)

October 14, 2007 7:11 PM  
Blogger Maxxed`ouT said...

Are you paying for the kid's therapy?
Cause they gonna need it..

October 19, 2007 10:29 PM  
Blogger hurricane_x said...

maxxed' out...
No, I'm the therapist!

October 19, 2007 11:08 PM  
Blogger الحمقاء المضلله innominate x said...

is that a poem for kids or a poem for freaks ?Ure going too far young man....:):):)

October 26, 2007 7:05 PM  
Blogger hurricane_x said...

yeah,..too far to come back :)

October 28, 2007 2:54 PM  

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