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Sunday, January 28, 2007

Obliterated!

Again I'm riding the dark horse,
Running through the labyrinth…
My friends are watching the cat dying…

I can Kill,
But I'm not dead.


I'm lost,
The doors are closed,
The painting on the wall is upside down.


I may smile,
But I can't forget.

The cat is watching my friends dying...
Dragged through the labyrinth I bleed…
The White horse is singing to the snake.


I can Lie,
But I can't betray.

Same paralysis every time,
I can't breathe nor move,
My hands are tied up...


I can't escape,
But I can hide.
.............
Still There ?!!
.

12 Comments:

Blogger Maat said...

i may have a totally diferent interpretation for it than the one u had when writing it.. i'll never know, but i really really like it. the development of the lines till the end... the state of.. dream or vision... i especially like the last part
"I can't escape,
But I can hide."

January 28, 2007 at 9:40 PM  
Blogger ^ H@fSS@^ said...

it can be very true hwat u saw, and it can be just ur wild imagination and high sensitivty, both cases i got struck, the words r so real and vived.
i liked the lines in italics, they made alot of sense to me, my kind of simple human philosophy.
************************

if it is true, try reading sorat elmolk just b4 u go to bed, or some tasbee7.

January 29, 2007 at 4:25 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

اسم حضرتك مذكور عندي في التاج اللي جالي من انا حرة و انا رديت عليها و بدوري بلففه على الباقي
زوروني تجدوا ما يسركم
i tagged u
heheheeee

hafsa

January 30, 2007 at 7:57 PM  
Blogger hurricane_x said...

maat..
mmm..
well, it wasn't exactly what I dreamt of, in fact I mentioned 30% of the dream, the other part was just...donno..sth!
but I tried to link the words in italic with the other sentences (I mean by adding a clue in each part)

hafsa..
as I said, it wasn't totally a dream..actually I mostly have nightmares and rarely dream regular dreams..!
I hate tags :D

January 31, 2007 at 6:43 PM  
Blogger ^ H@fSS@^ said...

listen, if u dont want to answer this tag , its fine, a friend of mine will pass a very twisted tag with what is so called hopefuly strange questions, if u like to wait thats fine, am tagging u anyway, whether this tag or another one,hehehheeee.

February 2, 2007 at 2:44 PM  
Blogger Elsede3' said...

gloomy as ever
have this nightmarish thing goin on
i like it, especially the "i lie, but i cant betray" part.

PS: the server is a real f*** up, i've been tryin to post a comment now for about a whole hour
u owe mem big time partner

February 3, 2007 at 4:43 AM  
Blogger frozen love said...

rghm eny e7tgt translation lkam word...lol
bs bgd nice post...3gbny awy

i lie
but i cant betray

i imagined it in arabic as well...gamda awy

February 3, 2007 at 5:54 AM  
Blogger hOby said...

i may smile
but i can't 4get!

the white horse is singing 2 the snake!

don't know why those 2 sentences acted like the msn nudge with me:)!

bey3gebne 7agat '3er el nas!
bas kal 3ada i liked it awi :)

February 3, 2007 at 10:42 AM  
Blogger hurricane_x said...

hafsa..
why not?!
ne2ansar letneen, hwa 2e7na warana 7aga :) weba3deen tag hafsotsha maytfawetsh :D

elsede'3..
yeah..it's goin' on and on...
and I owe u more than a big time :)

frozen love..
thx ya za3eem,... and I failed to imagine it in arabic :D

hoby..
mmm..
glad u liked it:)
a nudge..! but for how long will we keep smiling,..?

February 3, 2007 at 3:56 PM  
Blogger My Corner said...

in my case, I can't escape, & I can't hide

February 5, 2007 at 10:08 AM  
Blogger hOby said...

a nudge?!
wat a wierd expression!
i meant sth that can shake ur mind may b..
i don know 4 how long will we keep smiling?!
this is the very same THING u wrote about b4.. the undescribable!
p.s: not sure whether 'undescribable' is a correct english word :)

February 5, 2007 at 11:47 AM  
Blogger hurricane_x said...

reham..
hiding is not necessarily physical..!
u can be seen but u r actually hiding:)

hoby..
it's weird, but I like it..a nudge!

February 6, 2007 at 5:32 PM  

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