The Falling
Days follow..
Resisting the tide, you strive.
You become deprived of all what makes you human,
All what makes you alive.
Losing every bit of sanity..
Watching your dreams die one after another as if there was a plague.
Feeling these killing weights added on your chest..
Weights of burden and sufferings..
Making you suffocate.
It's way beyond misery..
You've passed this long ago.
Drowning in a ditch of sins..
Reaping what you sow.
Driven by rage..
Things rush out of your control.
Howling inside your head..
Tearing your brain cells in amusement..
You end up losing your soul.
Eyes thirsty for tears..
Lacking the power to cry,
But they just insist on staying inside to kill you.
Fears you can't defy.
You look in the mirror,
And see inside..
Disfigured, livid, shuddery.
Defeated, you fall..
You wait for the collision..
For the end.
posted by hurricane_x @ 11:49 PM
10 Comments:
I'll end up copying the whole thing in here if i wanna mention the parts that really touched me!
the images are so..true!
Losing every bit of sanity..
Watching your dreams die one after another as if there was a plague.
Feeling these killing weights added on your chest..
Weights of burden and sufferings..
Making you suffocate.
it is a plague
Driven by rage..
Things rush out of your control.
Howling inside your head..
Tearing your brain cells in amusement..
You end up losing your soul.
yesss!!..(da keda i'm trying to be selective)..
Eyes thirsty for tears..
Lacking the power to cry,
u killed me hurricane with these 2 lines
u truely killed me
can't comment
bye
You look in the mirror,
And see inside..
Disfigured, livid, shuddery.
Defeated, you fall..
You wait for the collision..
For the end.
er7m elk2aba ely gwaya bt7n dayman lklamk yabny...nice words wlahy..we 2slob kl3ada 7lw
my GOD!
my eyes were really thirsty 4 those tears ur words brought!
msh 3rfa a2ol it really touched deep within..!
i was trying 2 ignore that collision am waiting 4.. yet the words struck me in heart..
begad my best part:
Driven by rage..
Things rush out of your control.
Howling inside your head..
Tearing your brain cells in amusement..
You end up losing your soul.
maat..
thx,glad u liked it :)
images r true...cuz they're true!
hafsa..
mmm..obviously,I'm killing everyone around!
seems like u hated it as much as u liked it...and come back here!
frozen love..
thx man..I'm just trying to feed ur depression :)
hoby..
thx :)
tears..!!
it's a bliss :)
well..we r all waiting for the collision.. !
Losing every bit of sanity..
Watching your dreams die one after another as if there was a plague.
Feeling these killing weights added on your chest..
Weights of burden and sufferings..
Making you suffocate.
Thanks for reminding me of the insane life I am leading!
tab ana kont 3amla 3abeeta w mosh wa7'da baly..ba2a te3mel feya keda and make me confront the fact by looking in the mirror! mosh 7aram 3alik!
your words killed me!! Allah yesam7ak ba2a :D
simply great!! :)
RATATATATATATATA
machine gun fire my man
elmoshkela en elbackground 3amla sho3'l elmarra di, aw yemken da ta2seer el7'arasana
kol makont 2a2ra aktar kont ba3'oos fel background aktar
thnx :D
epi..
thx :)
now that u looked in the mirror, I announce u being legally insane!
elsede'3..
thx man :)
by the way..mentioning 2el'7arasana...is this word "two syllables" or "one syllable"? :P
hi hurricane
i need to send u sth, but i didnt find ur email, if u dont mind, u can email me and i can send the stuff.
sorry for bothering
salam
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